diamond mines
the paper is about the rhetorical relevance of diamond mines in the play “ death of a salesman”. the paper is already written and the sources are already provided, it just needs to be revised. in my teachers words I need to come up with a more creative title, the ending of the third paragraph needs to be changed so it’s not repeating the same thing over again, there needs to be more evidence from the play. he likes the idea that the American dream is willys diamond mine but also wants me to look at diamond mines as a metaphor for something, like the American dream or luck or being well liked. Talk about how Willy has to die and go to where is “ dark and full of diamonds” To achieve what he feels is best American dream. you can look and see idea what that mean the play is saying that really is not taking the necessary steps to achieve his dream and his relying on shortcuts, like killing himself. Is extremely important that you use the play text as evidence. if you have any questions about things that should be changed in the paper, feel free to ask or consult me. 🙂
