environmental responsibility
I am an international student, my English is very basic, please write this paper in Easy English and make some little mistakes, please!
This is a Definition Essay the topic of this essay is environmental responsibility; I choose this topic is because it is related to my semester topic— the end of recycling.
https://www.theatlantic.com/technology/archive/2019/03/china-has-stopped-accepting-our-trash/584131/
I show my professor about my thesis, claim and reason for my paper.
This is what I show her:
The issue I want to define from my topic is environmental responsibility.
Thesis: Environmental responsibility is a rule for a company’s operation, but it is more important to be applied in everyone’s daily life because every little makes a mickle.
I would like to focus on why people should take environmental responsibility to daily, and why it is important to do so.
A major objection I will encounter would be the costs of environmental responsibility, such as recycling. It seems to take more money to recycle than purchase new products nowadays, however, I want people to know that recycle worth its price and to be environmental responsibility is necessary.
This is what she responds:
I like that you’ve moved environmental responsibility to the front of your thesis. This helps the reader focus on the term. I think the category you are using to define environmental responsibility is still a little too broad for the reader to follow. You claim it is a rule. I think this could give you something to work with. So, consider: what is a rule? What is a social rule? A rule for a company? A personal rule? What happens if we break a rule, whether it is personal, social, or organization? What prevents us from breaking rules?
In other words, you will choose a term or issue related to your chosen semester topic and present an original thesis that defines and defends your position on the given term (or particular person, thing, act, or phenomenon). In the opening of your essay, introduce the borderline case you will examine and pose your definitional question. Next be certain to answer the question in the form of your thesis. In the first part of your argument, define the boundaries of your category (criteria) by reporting a definition used by others or by developing your own extended definition. In the second part of your argument (the match), show how your borderline case meets (or doesn’t meet) your definitional criteria.
