Essay

I have attached the essay that you would have to edit both a pdf version and a doc version whatever works for you.

1st- There are mistakes in this essay for example there are supposed to be 2 details in each body paragraph a total of 6 details. 1 detail should be from Little Red Riding Hood and the other should be from a different source that is attached to the cited work page. That goes for each of the body paragraphs. There are only 3 body paragraphs.

2nd – The 2nd paragraph starts off with “The traditional …..” make it more clear about what “occasioned the narrator’s use” means or rewrite the first sentence so it could make more sense with the rest of the paragraph.

3rd – In the same body paragraph as the 2nd step where it says “For instance, the Wolf asked the Little Red Riding Hood if her grandmother lives in the nearby location, “Does she live far off?” (Perrault, line 5). ” make this line a smoother quote transition to the next sentence.

4th – The 3rd Paragraph that starts off with “Secondly, the use of….” in the last sentence “Thus, the narrator is influenced to use the Little Red Riding Hood to express the fact that the little girl was beautiful.” This line doesn’t make any sense to the French culture, so what you have to do is change that last sentence line so it could relate to the rest of the paragraph which talks about how little red riding hood relates to the french culture.

5th- I have attached a screenshot file to this order carefully read the questions/ answers that have 1 out of 2 which are questions 1, 4, 10, 11, 17, 21, 22 in which you have to fix the essay in order for those number to change to 5 out 5 and 2 out of 2 and lastly read the questions/answers which are questions 23, 20, 19, 16, 13, 12, 9, 7, 2. What you have to do is fix the essay to what those answers tell you.

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