you wrote a rhetorical essay about 2weeks ago for me and my teacher gave feedback and what needs to be updated
you wrote a rhetorical analysis paper for me this was my teacher feedback for updates
Be sure your not just summarizing main ideas one paragraph is not tied to an element and another section jumps from one element to another with no break think of 3 seperate sections of the paper. Response section is missing so add that bring the outside source there
once you address the issues of citing from article finish with the 2 part thesis first half of thesis should focus on the use of logos pathos and ethos and the second half focus on position of either agreement or disagreement tweak the last two sentences in the thesis what does she use the facts and emotion to do? what is her purpose for writing the article. after that tweak the last sentence instead of a summary can you take a position do you agree or disagree about what she is saying about the threat to the American dream?
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